Monday, January 10, 2011

Chain-Writing

This creative essay is literally creative! It is featured within great and silly writings and filled with different ideas that will just crack you up. This essay is practically focused on the talk of toilets. It states the usage of toilets, how-tos, tips of awaring the dangers of public toilets and miraculous change atthe end of the essay!


"Toilet is a place where you complain about your unsatisfied life and forgive other peple. In my opinion, toilet is one of the most butiful place in the whole universe. In toilets, you can feel satisfaction you didn't before in your life by massive egestion and relaxation. Life is the most unfair thing,m but you can blame that to someone to another peple inyour own sectioned place.

As you steop in to a toilet , lock the door and combersome noise from the word and dissapear instantly. Howerver, public toilets may stin a lot. So you must always go in your own bathroom or check if the public toilets stinks. After you seat in a toilet, you talkabout people who you hate or play mobile games. Make sure you know who is seating next to you because that person muiight be the one ou are talking about. One more tip when tou are going to the bathroom is to bring issues. If ty you forgot to bring it, you are in a disasterous situation. Just don't forget ot bring you toilet paper with oyu.

This is enought for some tios, and i want to talk more about timings you need to be aware of while using bathroom. When you have a visitor at your place, it's very rude to spend a lot of time in your bathroom. a mute or 2 is adequate. You have to make your bathroom clean as well because the visitor might go in there.

Bathrooms can be big or small. It contains toilet, bathub and etc...

The teacher threw down the essay in disgust. No, it wasn't even worthy of the name "essay". The teacher shouted "who wrote this"?
She looked at the name at the top of the page. Jeniiger David duck. "Of course", she thougt and signed. "Who else?" the teacher said.
She was tired of having "little talks" with Jeniiger. She lokked sorry every time, but every time she would do it again, her obsession with toilets was impossible to keep it quiet. She sighed again. She had to do something soon.

Note to reader: The writers of the essay (?) - that is, all except for one-are verry sorry for creating such a horried pieceof writing. This exerice was chain - writing and a boy (whose name i will not reveal) started the essay in such a way. Again we are very sorry. I, the final writer, found it impossible to continue and changed it at the end.

Overall, i am pretty satisfied with the hard work and the effort put in this essay. Also, the contents in this essays is "different" and also creative! And being creative and writing different ideas in this essay was the goal for this essay so i believe this essay was a sucess according to the criterias given. Confidentally, if i was a teacher and was to grade this essay, i would give it an A.
What do you think? Please leave comments below...Thank you~~ :)

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